before you could ask
gave more than everything
too far, beyond forgive!
gave more than everything
too far, beyond forgive!
- I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.
In Spanish
antes de que usted podría pedir
dio más que todo
demasiado lejos, más allá de perdonar!
In Portugese
antes que você poderia perguntar
mais do que tudo deu
muito longe, além de perdoar!
lovely haiku ~ filled with emotion
ReplyDeleteThank You!! Yeah it was quite emotional for me too to write it..!
DeleteA very telling last line! It seems that realms beyond forgiveness can be overwhelming!
ReplyDeleteIt's sometimes difficult in a very considerate easy way...all for love..! :)
DeleteFor the people on the forgiving side, it's a challenge in both the cases.. both the decisions of forgiving or not, tests their strength!!!
ReplyDeleteSometimes, nothing matters... only thing we love to follow blindly is just love!!!! :) I agree with you Pranita, it's a definite challenge!
DeleteOften when we truly madly love someone, we simple ignore all the goofs up or any mistakes made... all for the love being, we love to giving them...just everything. Giving gifts to even be forgiven is just a normal act, despite the fact it hurts a lot!!!
ReplyDeletebeautiful expression. nature , an essential component of classical haiku could be used as a contrast to enhance the expression either with in or outside the haiku.
ReplyDeleteForgiving ... the best way to give unconditional love. Well written haiku.
ReplyDeleteFor your giveness please...if you are considered a giver, very humble or you are very nice...you are taken for granted...and you are seldom forgiven for the mistakes being done to you...and even for the pain you suffer, you are expected to seek forgiveness.. Rachana you made me think..
ReplyDeleteI seek forgiveness
for the mistakes done to me;
You were just being you..
RS:)
Very nice haiku. Love can be complicated. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHeartfelt your words!
ReplyDeleteNice read! :)